I can still remember the first concrete poem that I read. It was Mouse's Tail, by Lewis Carroll, which appears in his book Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. I thought the poem was very clever and showed it to my father. Nowadays lots of poets are trying out this clever poetry form and it is interesting to see what they are creating.
Brian P. Cleary
Illustrated by Andy Rowland
Poetry
For ages 6 to 8
Millbrook, 2015, 978-1-4677-4412-6
Most of the time poems are written so that words are in horizontal
lines that go across the page from left to right. We are used to this format
and comfortable with it, but some people like to write poems that are a little
different. They write concrete poems, which are poems that look like the thing
(or things) that the poem is about. The letters of the poem “are arranged on
the page to form a picture” of that thing. Thus a poem about a pair of scissors
might be arranged on the page so that the words in the poem form the picture of
a pair of scissors. Concrete poems are fun to create and they don’t have to rhyme,
so they are a wonderful poetic form for novice poets to try.
The first poem we
encounter in the book is Ode to a commode,
and the words on the page are arranged in a spiral so that they look like water
swirling in a toilet after it has been flushed. It is hard not to laugh as we
follow the words round and round until “the bowl fills back up in a minute.”
Next there is No Wonder he is so Quiet and we see a
poem that looks like a pair of glasses. We can tell at once that the writer has
a just got new glasses. He or she is thrilled to be able to see everything so
clearly, and now the writer knows why his or her friend is so quiet. It turns
out that the friend “was really a tall potted plant.”
A little further into the
book we encounter a poem called A twisted
Tale and we can see straight away what the poem is about because the words
are arranged on the page so that they look like a pretzel. We read how some
pretzels are soft, “chewy and warm” while others are “hard and you crunch.” The
great thing is that no matter what texture they are, pretzels are “always
delicious with lunch.”
Wonderful touches of
humor, amusing artwork, and a delicious moments of word play make this book of
poetry a must for young readers who appreciate poetry in all its forms.